This is one of my Pieces of writing and I chose to do some haikus and I am really happy with the way it has turned out, I think I did a good job with it and I and proud to say this is my piece of work, I like that the words I chose were meaningful and a lot different to what I normally write, I mean I usually write a lot of dark things but this one wasn't like that. I had to think long and hard about what I had to write and how I would write it
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I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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